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Erotic Writings...

Tue Jun 3, 2008, 6:38 AM
  • Listening to: Ween,Primus,Kraftwerk,Radiohead,Portishead
  • Reading: The God Delusion, City of Illusions
  • Watching: Star Trek Voyager episodes
  • Playing: MarioKart Wii Code: 1848-2066-3732 - Squiddhu
  • Drinking: Generic Orange Punch
Hi, *blush* yah, i can write erotic/romantic poetry and short stories. I've never really revealed them to anyone before - except really close friends or girlfriends, and sometimes not even them.
I am always afraid i'll seem like some old perv or something, but i enjoy writing them. I try to make them a little different, you don't see much poetry about pleasing a woman's toes, or two lovers, one a BBW and the other a guy like me making love in a field, or stories about the struggle between love and lust among an Angel and a Devil (well, you may have seen that one, but perhaps not quite like mine, i hope?)

But i've been encouraged by two people :iconcaeruleum: and :iconje6suis6mort6: to post more of my stuff in that theme, and have given me wonderful feedback. Thank you both for helping to pull out out this writer's hidden wings, hehe.

With the poems, i try to make them visual and provocative without stepping over a "raunch" barrier, use words to dance around the obvious to give the same effect. At least i try to.

With the stories, though, i kinda reach the "raunch" barrier a little, and maybe step over it, but i also try to put a real artistry into it. Again, the optimal word is "try". Hehe. So, if you're into possibly being aroused by words, please check out my writings and tell me, honestly, what you think.

Are they good? Are they corny? Did they get you turned on? Did they completely turn you off? Are they too much? Too little?
I've never let anyone read some of these, so although i like them for the imagery they create in MY mind, i don't know if they create the same imagery in many other minds.

So, without further Ado:

The Poetry
(if you can call it that...)

- Dewy Morning with His Goddess - A lovely romp in the meadow

- Bathing Beauties - About a lovely time in the bath (not from personal experience, unfortunately)

- Ashitsuki (Foot Moon) - One of the Japanese words for the Sole of the Foot

- Below the Hem of your Jeans - Always sexy to see toes poking out from the bottom of jeans or skirts

- Grapes to Wine - Pretty self explanatory, hehe.


The Erotic Fiction

- Angeline and Demona, Chapter 1: Awakening - An Angel girl gets enticed by a Devil girl.

So, tell me what you think if you want to read any of them, be honest, and, uhhh ... don't stop being my friend? *hides in corner*

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I always say go for it - if somebody doesn't want to see it they don't have to look!

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keep it up! i love ur art and ur poetry :]

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If these words are poetry
Then put them in a book
For a page full of question marks
Is one hard to overlook
Beyond the metaphors
(The truth will be hidden in plain view)
I am not much for poetry/writings, but yours is good, I love the imagery :)

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"May those that love us, love us-and those that don't love us, may God turn their hearts, and if he can't turn their hearts, may He turn their ankles so we will know them by their limping."
I've been a bit too busy to get around to reading things, but I honestly can't wait: words to me are honestly so much more erotic the picture.

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Word of the day: Lazy
Used in a sentence:
"I am too lazy to make an actual word of the day"
i wish i had the scrotal audacity to show some of the things i've written
Your modesty is adorable. Especially considering how immodest (is that a word) your art is! I've enjoyed your written works, and I'm not even a foot person.

It's great to see you trying new things. :)

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Haha, aw shucks. And thank you. It is fun doing new things. Well, they're not really even new, since i've been writing like this since i hit puberty (just fewer times and far between than my drawings), but it feels good to know i am getting a positive response from it, from poeple who aren't foot people, or creepy internet foot stalkers or fat girl stalkers (i swear, i keep getting this mysterious MSN contacts who keep asking me if i have hairy fat women or feet porn - i tell them no, not more than my own drawings, anyway - but they come back the next day and ask again ... and they're usually from some place like Turkey .... weirdoes).

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"Receiving transmission from David Bowie's nipple antennae..." - Flight of the Conchords

My BBW Art!
Definition of Beauty - [link]
Don't hide in a corner, that just makes us have to go drag you out of there. You are a talented writer, I like your poems and stories.

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And they say I should be locked up.... pffffff...
Aww! Don't hide, noone's gonna stop being your friend! :laughing:
I haven't gotten around to read your story yet, but I really enjoyed the poetry! You'll see my comments on them. :aww:
I'm gonna go around waiting for an excuse to call something "a delicious mess" or "flesh balls" now, see you later! :D

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