I am always afraid i'll seem like some old perv or something, but i enjoy writing them. I try to make them a little different, you don't see much poetry about pleasing a woman's toes, or two lovers, one a BBW and the other a guy like me making love in a field, or stories about the struggle between love and lust among an Angel and a Devil (well, you may have seen that one, but perhaps not quite like mine, i hope?)
But i've been encouraged by two people
With the poems, i try to make them visual and provocative without stepping over a "raunch" barrier, use words to dance around the obvious to give the same effect. At least i try to.
With the stories, though, i kinda reach the "raunch" barrier a little, and maybe step over it, but i also try to put a real artistry into it. Again, the optimal word is "try". Hehe. So, if you're into possibly being aroused by words, please check out my writings and tell me, honestly, what you think.
Are they good? Are they corny? Did they get you turned on? Did they completely turn you off? Are they too much? Too little?
I've never let anyone read some of these, so although i like them for the imagery they create in MY mind, i don't know if they create the same imagery in many other minds.
So, without further Ado:
The Poetry
(if you can call it that...)
- Dewy Morning with His Goddess - A lovely romp in the meadow
- Bathing Beauties - About a lovely time in the bath (not from personal experience, unfortunately)
- Ashitsuki (Foot Moon) - One of the Japanese words for the Sole of the Foot
- Below the Hem of your Jeans - Always sexy to see toes poking out from the bottom of jeans or skirts
- Grapes to Wine - Pretty self explanatory, hehe.The Erotic Fiction
- Angeline and Demona, Chapter 1: Awakening - An Angel girl gets enticed by a Devil girl. So, tell me what you think if you want to read any of them, be honest, and, uhhh ... don't stop being my friend? *hides in corner*
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Definition of Beauty - [link]
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Devious Comments
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If these words are poetry
Then put them in a book
For a page full of question marks
Is one hard to overlook
Beyond the metaphors
(The truth will be hidden in plain view)
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"May those that love us, love us-and those that don't love us, may God turn their hearts, and if he can't turn their hearts, may He turn their ankles so we will know them by their limping."
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Word of the day: Lazy
Used in a sentence:
"I am too lazy to make an actual word of the day"
It's great to see you trying new things.
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"Receiving transmission from David Bowie's nipple antennae..." - Flight of the Conchords
My BBW Art!
Definition of Beauty - [link]
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And they say I should be locked up.... pffffff...
I haven't gotten around to read your story yet, but I really enjoyed the poetry! You'll see my comments on them.
I'm gonna go around waiting for an excuse to call something "a delicious mess" or "flesh balls" now, see you later!
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